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Random WIP by ~bluedevilsinger:iconbluedevilsinger:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > People

©2008-2009 ~bluedevilsinger
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The scanner killed it. I tried getting it as close to where you can actually see the shading.

It's at that point where I am frustrated with it. It seems like something's off, but it could be that it's at the frustrating stage. I haven't gotten to the ears yet. I started it months ago actually. Like, March.

It's just, ack, frustrating me. It's to the point where I look at it and groan in frustration.

Suggestions anyone?

Tools so far--2H pencil, mechanical pencil, tortillons (for shading), my fingers, sketch book paper

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*Celsa Jun 13, 2008, 10:07:48 AM
I think is looking good. About what's wrong... let me see............. Maybe the separation between the eyes and the nose is a little long. The chin could be a little more roundy maybe. There's also 2 lines on the central part of the neck, over the collarbone, that I'm not sure what they're. Can't think anything else...
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~bluedevilsinger Jun 13, 2008, 1:20:08 PM
You're missing the 'it' after 'think' in your first sentence. What is looking good? It is looking good. Or the picture. Whatever you choose.

Eh, I don't think that's it. The two lines on top of the collarbone is that dip in your throat. XD At least, I have a dip there above my collarbone. I think it's the shading that's bugging me most.
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*Celsa Jun 14, 2008, 8:28:15 AM
Yeah, I noticed now when I re-read the message..... Lately I have some crisis. Guess it's showing up.... U_U

Oh, that. I would rather do that just with shading.
I think the shading is fine. May be because it's unfinished.
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~bluedevilsinger Jun 14, 2008, 10:57:52 AM
I think that's it too. It's just at that utterly frustrating stage where I don't know where to go from there. XD I put the lines there for guiding myself.
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*Celsa Jun 15, 2008, 7:44:00 AM
Ahh.... At that point I most times just satrt everything over. But I don't think you should. Maybe take some rest, and resume work later.
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~bluedevilsinger Jun 15, 2008, 11:25:44 AM
Probably. I'm jus kinda staring at it figuring out how to work things out with it.
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*Celsa Jun 16, 2008, 9:00:15 AM
It works not to look at it for a long while. Your eye gets used to it if you stare, and you don't see what's off. Rest the eye from it for some time, and then look at it agan.

(My god.... The previous message I wrote seems horribly written >_< )
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~bluedevilsinger Jun 16, 2008, 9:35:47 AM
Hahaha, it wasn't that bad.
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*kitton Oct 12, 2008, 10:30:22 AM
The hair looks really nice :) I like the shape of her eyes. It's very simple but it has a nice natural feel to it.. I like it!
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June 6, 2008
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